AFI导演毕业后重拍自己一年级的第二个短片，进了Tribeca。production方面没有什么问题，剧本很一般。不太喜欢。

理发师演技炸裂，内心的矛盾与纠结，终究与这个世界格格不入

A case study I watched at the AFI masterclass of professor Peter Markham. The barber’s imagination of killing the gangster with spattered blood has left me a deep impression. But I wasn’t raised any questions, just felt the short film is great. In contrast to those who discussed and raised many puzzles, I felt I was isolated and very self-doubting.

AFI cycle的revise版本，课上分析了两天的剧本都没想起来看过，直到看到成片第二场scene突然全想起来了，the power of visual language啊

Y1S2-Film Production课堂分享，很简单的故事，标准美式结构（热美式hh），人物信息-激励事件-矛盾冲突，反倒觉得Stake仅仅是合格，从而结尾和矛盾冲突相比不够顶格，如果能把徒弟的内容多铺一点，剧本会更好（也和我英文字幕阅读缺陷+墨西哥了解不足有关）～ 强在导演功力的扎实，紧张感绷满全程，人物内心的Conflict放超大，（之前刮眉毛的时候用剃刀留了个口子，从那以后开始对刀片产生PTSD....） https://www.amazon.com/gp/video/detail/B0FVMBDLDY https://watch.afi.com/movie/contrapelo?whereToWatch=all